Head First into the chrysal clear , absolutely frozen water.The water clearer than ever before , the beautiful red salmon struggling up stream as I soar thru the air like an eagle. My head smashing into the chili water , it seems like my life flashed right in front of my eyes. I dip into the water , the freezing water touching the tip of my hair for the first time as the rest of my body enters the creek.
The grey truck speeding like lighting thru the red light almost like he was asking to die. The oncoming motorcycle also going very fast thru the green light as it was his turn , not the truck's. The truck and motorcycle were heading right for each other and it was bound to happen. Right before the collision happened it was like the world stood still , the terrifying look on the motorcycles rider face was like the world was going to end.They collided. The motorcyclist went flying thru the air as the motorcycle bounced off the enormous truck. The man laying there in the middle of the intersection , unfortunately dead as the truck driver broke into tears knowing it was his fault.
Monday, January 11, 2010
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Well done. I like the comment, "I collided." It sets it up for you to describe the action further.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to hear more from both of these stories. Cool.
wow great job i love the story very decriptive maybe u should think of keep going with these storys
ReplyDeletegood story there was lots of description in both story's.
ReplyDeleteit was good
ReplyDeletei like the story you commpletely slowed down
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