The boy had warm tears dripping down his face from his big puffy eyes as he huddled up in the corner of his room ignoring everyone. This is when hes found out his cat died by getting hit by a car. He had Big red cheeks and he used his his hands and finger to wipe off the tears on face dripping down to his neck and body. He felt broken and empty inside like he had nothing else to live for. He huddled there in the corner as his lips curled up as he screamed and cried , eventually after laying there for a while thinking about what has happened he stopped screaming and crying.
The baseball pitcher thru the old fist pump as he struck out the last batter. He raised his hands in triumph as he jumped in the air. He dropped to is knees and started yelling in happiness . His team started running towards him from the dugout. The whole team picked him up and raised him on their shoudlers. As the crowd went wild and this feeling in my stomach like never before. It was the happiest moment of my life.
The old man jumped and yelled as he heard the smoke alarm go off. He was never frightened as bad before in his life. He has this feeling in his stomach as if his life was going to end. He was petrified of this smoke alarm as he as never heard one before or he as never been in this situation before. He put his hand covered by his sleeve over his mouth to no breathe the smoke or fire in. When he got out he was relieved that this was a false alarm.
The baby yelled at the top of his loungs "Give me my toy back" as he flailed his arms wanting his toy back after his brother took his toy. He ran to the corner and sat there. He crossed his arms as he pouted and frowned. He ignored everyone that came to him to try to cheer him up. He even ignored his brother trying to give back his toy . He finally stoped crying and accepted his toy. Then he went back to playing with his toy car.
Friday, October 2, 2009
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ReplyDeleteWarrior16 I liked the detail you used on how the cat died and how you felt. I didn't like that you did not use dress-ups to make it more detailed.
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